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her kiss |
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3
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valentines day |
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3
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the pain of love |
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nothing but a dream |
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4
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you hurt |
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11
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love |
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4
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Death |
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Scream |
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her touch |
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8
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Heart of Stone |
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The Heroes Heart |
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1
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Doubt |
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7
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Ode To The Roleplayer |
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beyond your hate |
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taking it back |
her kiss
the table has turned and the time is right
i think im going to die tonight
my hopes are torn and my heart is dead
i dont know whats going on in my head
She saw right through me and looked at the guy
standin behind me and passed me by
I dont understand what i did for this
I wish i was the one who got her kiss
the smile is fake and the grin a ruse
i knew it was true that i could only lose
inside it hurts to see them pass by
i see it all and i see the lie
ive seen the real him and he doesnt care
about who she is just what she wears
he only wants to get her in bed
then he will drop her there alone and unwed
She saw right through me and looked at the guy
standin behind me and passed me by
I dont understand what i did for this
I wish i was the one who got her kiss
I loved her dearly and i loved her true
but she didnt see me what is new?
i cant see why people go for the one with pretty hair
and not the one that gives a care
but time is up and il tell you this
he isnt the one who diserves her kiss
he loves her for looks and nothing more
i see her pain knockin at the door
she saw right through me and looked at the guy
standing behind me and passed me by
i dont understand what i did for this
i wish i was the one who got her kiss
i wish i could tell her how i feel
and know that she would not make a big deal
ive been hurt enough to keep my feelings in check
but sometimes i want to say what the heck
but i know that she wont like me back
shes to busy with the guy thats sellin crack
she saw right through me and looked at the guy
standin behind me and passed me by
i dont understand what i did for this
i wish i was the one who got her kiss
she ignores the truth and doesnt see the signs
the truth thats written between the lines
about the boy she thinks is the best
and how he is just like all the rest
just a punk who wants to get in her bed
and leave her wishing she was dead
she loves the face and believes the lies
she doesnt see whats infront of her eyes
| On March 4th 2008 dangg101 Said : | |
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Wow that was great i love your poetry |
| On February 26th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said : | |
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This is crazy good. I love the repetition. It's almosy lyrical. The feelings are real. Very understandable. You are good. I like it. |
| On February 26th 2008 rebeldork2 Said : | |
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Omg this is awsome really good nice job !!! |
| On February 25th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is soo brilliant! I really ejoy reading your stuff. It's so good. I really love this. |
| On February 22nd 2008 nmchich Said : | |
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wow this is better thin i thought it would be! great job :) |


