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i though of it last year

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To the end

Views (209) Love Created on 2-23-07 Flag

If my love were a Moutain

We would grow stronger as we tried to reach the top

 

If my love were a Ocean

We could sail togeather to the end of time and never see land

 

If my love were a Fire

We could look into eachother eyes as it's an undieing flame

 

If my love were the Rain

We could dance forever in it as it would never end

 

If my love was a Race

It be the fastest I've ever ran just to see you at the end

 

If me love were you...

well then it'd be perfect...

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On June 6th 2007 lostmybaby15 Said :
lostmybaby15 i love it....you are so awesome
On May 31st 2007 Hollehmariee Said :
Hollehmariee lol @ your comments. you seem to be a loving person, keep writing, seems like alot of people can relate =]
On May 2nd 2007 RPlunkett Said :
RPlunkett Good, seems like you have a very loving spirit about you. Keep writing.
On February 24th 2007 bmonkeyrubio Said :
bmonkeyrubio aw this is cute. i love it!!!=]
On February 23rd 2007 jdw3443 Said :
jdw3443 thats really good! It makes up for misspelling mountain lol ;-)
On February 23rd 2007 Gigglez200969 Said :
Gigglez200969 awwww thats so good i love it!
On February 23rd 2007 Zing18 Said :
Zing18 oh lol i also misspelled mountain
On February 23rd 2007 Zing18 Said :
Zing18 darn i just relized i shoulda put more at the fire part ~.~