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Reversal
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Created on 4-22-07
He saw her beaten on the floor
He saw the broken, shattered door
He noticed the open beer on the counter
Cigarette butts were on the table
He quickly shuddered at the sight
Finally realized what he had done
Then all of a sudden
The door became fixed
The girl stood up
Smile on her face
The beer bottle closed
The world undone
Then out of no where
He finally woke up
And saw his world around him
The girl asleep next to him
He went back to sleep
and when morning came
He kissed her
Like he did never before
No fighting between them
Anymore
The world was fixed
With the reverse
of the world...
Please Login to post comments| On July 2nd 2008 Kidojidoari Said : | |
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This is awesome. :0 I really like this~
^^ *claps* |
| On April 28th 2007 RagdollKirstie Said : | |
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me like! ^U^ |
| On April 24th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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I wish it was this simple....I really like this!!! |
