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Hell
If the world is so well
Then why does it feel like Hell
We all have our moments
But they seem to last forever
Always to end by never
In a land of fantasy, and envious delight
I feel the ecstasy, that is my high light
Never again to feel the burning of the world of the outside
I'm stuck inside my mind now, please do sit and wait a while
For soon I'll be awakened by my troublesome foe
His name is called the sun
The moon leaves it's place in the Heavens
and is taken by the fire
and here it seems to come again
The day comes by the houe
and once again I ask the world
If the world is so well
Then why does it feel like Hell
| On July 29th 2008 XxOliviaxX9 Said : | |
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this truly does make you think |
| On June 23rd 2008 ddiana3 Said : | |
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i like this poem. i have the same thought im guessing this world is hell. =) DianaMarcela |


