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Empathy to Apathy.
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Created on 3-7-08
The way others feel.
Makes me feel in a similiar way.
I know it's all in my head.
But to feel dead but alive.
What makes one feel alive.
Is it the touch of another?
What is it to feel.
Unaffected by love.
Unaffected by death.
What do they have that we don't.
Makes me feel in a similiar way.
I know it's all in my head.
But to feel dead but alive.
What makes one feel alive.
Is it the touch of another?
What is it to feel.
Unaffected by love.
Unaffected by death.
What do they have that we don't.
Please Login to post comments| On March 18th 2008 PoeticPang Said : | |
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to live is to have the ability to "think" and "respond" .... i like the way u structure out the thoughts in these forms of words and the question to be asked in the center of it all, gives such more meaning ... wonderful job! |
| On March 9th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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So this one is rather thought provoking~ I like that in a poem :) |
