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Yet another about my step dadRate this Poem
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Thoughts in my mind |
My love is gone.
You probally don't remember me
But I remember you
You made me smile, you made me laugh
You chased away my nightmares and made my dreams come true
My heart broke into peices
The very day I heard you couldn't breathe
Forever you stay in your eternal slumber
Forever I stay in my eternal depression
I remember the warmness of your arms across my chest
And the kindness in your eyes
These tresaures are gone now
I think I might cry
I hate myself for breathing
While you sit in a coffin breathless
I'd give you all the breath from my chest if were possible
So I'd be able to see you again
My heart is broken
My eyes are in tears
I feel sick to my stomach
It hurts to have the one you hold close disapear
Alone I face the world again
Alone I sit and cry again
I can't do this by myself
I need you but you can't come back
I know you didn't meant to leave
But I can't help wonder if you wanted to
My heart wants you back
But my head know you never will
| On August 7th 2008 Alli684 Said : | |
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I like it! |
| On May 7th 2008 audica Said : | |
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sadness, but well written. i don't think he wanted to leave the world, cuz then he'd be wanting to leave you. and it's clear to see that u loved him-and still do. it will be ok. |
| On May 2nd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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wow, this is really deep but sad. i am sorry for your lose, XxbloodstainxX and BoxRacing. I agree with that i am sure he still loves you no matter what. He will always be in your heart and still is no matter what. |
| On April 30th 2008 BoxRacing Said : | |
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This made me sad. This is deep. Reminds me of Tyler. It's alright, I'm sure he loves you. I would if I were him. |


