XxbloodstainxX

A vile, sickening, disturbing poem

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Victim of Rape

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Created on 4-13-08

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I loved you from the first day I set eyes on you

Sweet, fragile, innocent looking thing

Here in my arms you used to lay

You're often naughty, but that's okay

Daddy likes it when you break the rules that way

Come here child, be still, be brave

Let me give you what I've been longing for

That punishment you deserve

You can run, but you can't hide

You know I'll always find you

I want you, I need you

Listen now, I'm warning you

Keep these lips locked tight, never reveal the truth

Tell anyone about this and you'll have a price to pay

For you shall till your dieing day

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On April 15th 2008 KiTiEwAzHeRe Said :

	dats sad!! dam i know jus how u feel.

On April 13th 2008 XD3aThxBlaD3X Said :

	=P I Like It Not All RainBow's And SunShine :/ Good Job...Could've Been A Bit More Sicker Though.

On April 13th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :

	No, this wasn't from a personal experience. I never was raped, it was just in my mind at the time, sick, I know. Also, in the last line, it's supposed to say, "for you shall suffer from your dieing day"

On April 13th 2008 2543 Said :

	ummm wow i'm sorry if this really happened to you Great job on the poem though!

On April 13th 2008 smartb18 Said :

	hmm....i really like this, its not as sick and twisted as it could be, but its good none the less.....

On April 13th 2008 kittykattykett Said :

	omg, this is sad. the upsetting kind of sad not the sick sad.

On April 13th 2008 stiffroll Said :

	um...wow. i hope this isnt from personal experience.