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Youth

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I remeber my days as a young child

my mind yet to develop, not knowing anything at all

Unaware of what the world was really like

Oh so innocent, so happy, so free

Days filled with smiles and laughter

Happy go lucky, with not a care in the world

Life was cherished and treasured

So beautiful, so perfect

but I've grown up, I've seen the world's flaws

I've discovered the dark, depressing secrets

I've seen them in my eyes

As I've grown up, the beautiful image in my innocent eyes has faded

Been replaced with a horific image

How I long to go back to the warm, peaceful days as a child

And put my damaged life behind me

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On April 5th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute It's beautiful, i love it!
On March 31st 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz nice.
On March 31st 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x Nice job!
On March 31st 2008 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess This was beautifully done doll. I wish I had been a child to begin with - didn't really have a childhood actually so perhaps I'm not missing as much as you
On March 29th 2008 audica Said :
audica wow, u were right when u said it was one of ur better poems. i love it!
On March 29th 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 so true,I can really relate to this.Wonderful job!
On March 28th 2008 october1015 Said :
october1015 I agree with sixtiesdoll...I loved this...
On March 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Dude! I see that in my eyes more and more as I grow older and I hate it! It's hard to fake not being broken in ways. Loved this alot!!
On March 28th 2008 KibaFanatic Said :
KibaFanatic awesome dipictoin of growing up, CHILDHOOD ROCKS!!!!!!!! yeah good job