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For my mom's third husband, her exRate this Poem
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Why dad, why?
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Created on 3-27-08
Hand in hand
Mouth to mouth
Rings on your fingers
A mistake wating to happen
A tragic regret
Toxic words fly out of your mouth
Inside they sting and fill me with agony
Punishment after punishment to suffer
Kicks so hard my head bangs against the wall
Brutal attacks
Battle after battle I lose everyone
Mom suffers too
Through your words and rare beatings
Your cruelity among both of us makes me cry
I can no longer sleep, pain is too deep
Don't you feel my agony, my pain?
Do my tears even matter to you?
What have I done to deserve this?
What did I do to make you hate me so bad?
I'm a terrible person?
Did I cause you to suffer?
Since when did I deserve this?
I don't want to live a trgedy, a world of misery
I'll never forget the hell you sentenced me through
I hope you're happy
Please Login to post comments| On June 11th 2008 momsrule Said : | |
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| On April 9th 2008 MonkeyLover115 Said : | |
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i wrote one kinda like this,, i think i like yours a little better though!!!! lol but yeah i loved it this was really good :) :) |
| On April 6th 2008 Kep89 Said : | |
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very good job, sad but good. |
| On March 29th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said : | |
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Painfull. Greatly written but horribly traigic. Keep up the great work. |
| On March 28th 2008 KibaFanatic Said : | |
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This is great, excellent conveyance of emotion. You wrote it so that other people can relate and start to understand what its like. I love you for that!! |
| On March 28th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said : | |
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gd 1, keep up the gd work and keep writing. |
| On March 28th 2008 cherrypie1440 Said : | |
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thats amazin' defintly deep |
| On March 27th 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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BEAUTIFUL Kmp on more,,, |
| On March 27th 2008 audica Said : | |
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i love the word choice. great poem |
| On March 27th 2008 kesaia1029 Said : | |
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beautiful beyond belief.Very deep I really enjoyed reading this.Keep it up! =) |
| On March 27th 2008 BoxRacing Said : | |
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Whoa. I do like this one. Lots of emotion. This is my favorite. |
| On March 27th 2008 tiffyg2010 Said : | |
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the emotion is. amazing. very nice job. very very nice job. and i know that i can relate. gosh. this is one of the best ive read in a long time |
| On March 27th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is one of the saddest poems! I'm sorry sweetie. *hugs* It's really well written, and deep. I love that. Nice job on it :) |
