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Created on 3-27-08
Wandering through the water
Steping in too deep
Body is pulled
Forced underneath the fierce waves
Incapable of breathing
Choking, suffering, suffocated, smothered
Harmed by the waves
Dragged to the bottom of the surface
Left their to die
Please Login to post comments| On March 27th 2008 audica Said : | |
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it's really good!!! (when i wrote my drowning poem, i wrote it right after i watched guardian!) lol! |
