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Abusive father kills loving mother.Rate this Poem
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Created:
01/30 2008
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87
Category:
Tragedy
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I'll Lay My Troubles Down. |
Mommy help me!
I fall to the floor and I see you watching
your crying and bleeding and painfuly dieing.
I know what I should, but I'm to afriad to.
Mommy help me fight back, he's hitting me now!
Why is dad so mad at me? I wish I could know.
Now he's slapping my face and yelling 'you ho!'
Mommy if I stay here you can go!
I see you get up quietly
You grab the metal flash light and go up behind dad
With one hit to the head you think that he's dead.
But he rises with a gun and points it at you.
He says it's been hell living with a child like me
And all of the rest I did not deserve to see.
| On February 27th 2008 flutytute Said: |
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| this go to me.... reminds me of my dad... Really good! |
| On February 22nd 2008 TheDragonwitch Said: |
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| Oh boy, that is so well written, but I must agree I really hope it's not reality. |
| On February 22nd 2008 mydragonlord Said: |
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| Knowing what i do now. For once in my life I am speechless!! I hope to all the gods that this is only a poem and a preminition. |
| On February 1st 2008 Crosspiano Said: |
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| oh wow.........how sad.........and violent good work |
| On January 31st 2008 amptone Said: |
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| Damn, very bold work...very good too! |


