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Just a recollection of then and nowRate this Poem
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Night Terror |
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My Love, My Poison |
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When I Held You |
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Unconditional |
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Moral Collisions |
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In the Darkness of the Night |
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Pre Planned Murder |
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Nameless |
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Nature |
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Suicidal Depression |
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Abyss |
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One letting go |
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Together |
Unconditional
Long nights of walking the floor
calming you with a lullaby
anything to make the tears stop
frustrated and tired, I would cry
There is so much more in those moments
At the time I was blind to see
but the more you grow and with each day
you become more and more a part of me
Sticky popsicle fingers grasp mine
as we walk aimlessly beneath the sun
Your eyes sparkling with curiousity
Amazed by everything, taking them in one by one
The end of the day is growing near, the sun sets
Casting it's shades of pinks, oranges, and purples across the sky
Time for bed I kiss you goodnight
Time for another lullaby
Singing softly, Hush little baby...
A memory comes to mind
of time I thought unpleasnt things
in the midst of sleepless nights
I hold you closely the tears rain down
forgive me, my little one
There was never a moment when I didn't love you
and there will never be one to come
| On October 5th 2007 sabrina225 Said : | |
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i love it...its soo sweet when your kids are old enough to understand you should really share this with them |
| On September 11th 2007 Pikkakard Said : | |
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This is great. I love the way it's written and I agree with the below comment about the honesty of your poem. |
| On September 10th 2007 Dax79 Said : | |
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I agree with hottdayum92, but what I also like about this one is it is so honest. Most parents would never admit having negetive thoughts torwards their child when they are over exhuasted, but I believe everyone does at one point. As much as we love our kids they are very trying and can make anyone feel defeated at times. Nice Work! |
| On September 8th 2007 Hottdayum92 Said : | |
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i really like this! its so sweet and to the point. it says a lot in just a small poem. great job!!! :) |


