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Dedicated to my sons

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When I Held You

Views (101) Love Created on 8-30-07 Flag

Cradling you securely in my arms

My heart feeling as if it were going to explode

With every beat, with your every breath

A tidal wave of emotions rushing over me

Pride, fear, love, anxiety

 

Overwhelmed by this tiny miracle

Every heartache and every void

Vanished in an instant, the moment our eyes met

My gaze locked, engrossed in your every motion

Cherishing every second, Vowing my devotion

 

Time has run its course

Twas only yesterday that I held you

helpless in my arms

Tis now that I am helpless to you...

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On October 5th 2007 sabrina225 Said :
sabrina225 your a very good deep writer i love your work keep it up
On September 11th 2007 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Wow... what a great poem. It flows so well.