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Darkness Somewhere

Views (127) Passion Created on 2-24-08 Flag

Night draws around me

I close my eyes

try to remember

the reason i cried

 

the day went by slow

with troubles and scorn

no one understands me

and my heart as been torn

 

i look at the ceiling

still awake in my bed

while thoughts of anger

run through my head

 

it all I can do

to not get up and scream

i faced a had lesson

things arnt how they seem

 

so i tell all you people

learn a lesson from me

there more in this world

then what you can see

 

love is a feeling

emotion a trust

sadness a blanket

but its all a must

 

through good times or bad

the world keeps on turning

though on the inside

my whole life is burning

 

i dont know where i'm going

when dreaming at night

the upcoming day

is but another new fright

 

so now i will sleep

with these thoughts in my head

nothing around me

but darkness and dread

 

though the new day may come

and the light will then shine

i know its dark somewhere

and that world is mine

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On February 28th 2008 HumanF17TH Said :
HumanF17TH aww this is ad..great poem though!
On February 26th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 i really like it! i like the rhythm to it
On February 25th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 i felt every single emotion that was in your poem. the poem it's self was amazing
On February 24th 2008 AlBobby Said :
AlBobby i like the impact of the last line. and the concept of the whole poem (at least the way i understand it to be). very awesome.
On February 24th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s awww wowsers.
On February 24th 2008 icewillow13 Said :
icewillow13 interesting
On February 24th 2008 katkent15 Said :
katkent15 cool
On February 24th 2008 XSilentNoiseX Said :
XSilentNoiseX sry everyone, i realize there are some typos. if you have any questu=ions about anything in specific feel free to message me
On February 24th 2008 avder Said :
avder i love it. it reminds me of one of my poems...the mood..not the words!! AWESOME work!!
On February 24th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 wow... very emotional Nice job!
On February 24th 2008 mitchy8125 Said :
mitchy8125 aww, sad, i love it