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sat down and this is what came to meRate this Poem
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Leaving Yourself |
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For Yourself |
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Darkness Somewhere |
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Drunk Driver |
Darkness Somewhere
Night draws around me
I close my eyes
try to remember
the reason i cried
the day went by slow
with troubles and scorn
no one understands me
and my heart as been torn
i look at the ceiling
still awake in my bed
while thoughts of anger
run through my head
it all I can do
to not get up and scream
i faced a had lesson
things arnt how they seem
so i tell all you people
learn a lesson from me
there more in this world
then what you can see
love is a feeling
emotion a trust
sadness a blanket
but its all a must
through good times or bad
the world keeps on turning
though on the inside
my whole life is burning
i dont know where i'm going
when dreaming at night
the upcoming day
is but another new fright
so now i will sleep
with these thoughts in my head
nothing around me
but darkness and dread
though the new day may come
and the light will then shine
i know its dark somewhere
and that world is mine
| On February 28th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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aww this is ad..great poem though! |
| On February 26th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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i really like it!
i like the rhythm to it |
| On February 25th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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i felt every single emotion that was in your poem. the poem it's self was amazing |
| On February 24th 2008 AlBobby Said : | |
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i like the impact of the last line. and the concept of the whole poem (at least the way i understand it to be).
very awesome. |
| On February 24th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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awww wowsers. |
| On February 24th 2008 icewillow13 Said : | |
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interesting |
| On February 24th 2008 katkent15 Said : | |
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cool |
| On February 24th 2008 XSilentNoiseX Said : | |
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sry everyone, i realize there are some typos. if you have any questu=ions about anything in specific feel free to message me |
| On February 24th 2008 avder Said : | |
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i love it. it reminds me of one of my poems...the mood..not the words!! AWESOME work!! |
| On February 24th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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wow... very emotional Nice job! |
| On February 24th 2008 mitchy8125 Said : | |
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aww, sad, i love it |


