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I'm new at poems but I hope you like it!Rate this Poem
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Pain
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Created on 5-21-07
INSIDE OF ME
THE CHAINS ARE TIGHT
CAN'T GET A GRIP
IT JUST ISN'T RIGHT
U'LL NEVER KNOW THE FEELING
I WISH IT WOULD LEAVE
I WISH IT DIDN'T HURT
YOU'LL NEVER KNOW WHATS HAPPENING
CAUSE I DON'T SHOW IT
I DON'T WANT ANYONE TO KNOW IT
INSIDE I WISH THEY'D GO AWAY
THE VOICES THEY ALL BRING ME PAIN
KNOWING THEY CAN WIN THE GAME
I'D HAD ENOUGH
BEFORE I KNEW IT THEY'D WON
AND I WAS DONE
BY:JESSICA COBLE
Please Login to post comments| On July 12th 2007 thekillerheart Said : | |
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well nice writting skills.. and very deep |
| On July 12th 2007 thekillerheart Said : | |
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wow thats very nice |
| On July 11th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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very deep |
| On June 18th 2007 joker4lifead Said : | |
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it is good |
| On May 21st 2007 Toxxicduck Said : | |
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NICE POEM. For a newb poem writer you are pretty good. Beginners luck. I feel your pain, maybe not the experience but the pain yeah. |
