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Pain |
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Unwanted Situation |
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Goodbye |
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All whom I hold dear |
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You crossed the line |
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I'm sorry I left you....... |
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Childhood memories |
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Completely helpless |
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Best friends are the best!!! |
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Don't wait til its too late |
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Live life moment to moment |
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Thank you! |
Don't wait til its too late
I loved you with all my heart
I waited for 2 years for you
Then finally you asked me out
It lasted...for a week
You let your friend control your mind
Then you took over
We went back out
It was the best time of my life
We spent everyday of the summer together
Then when we both had to visit family
It came down to this
You didn't love me
You wanted to "Take a break"
Well ur little break
Broke my heart
You thought I would be back
But I didn't come back
You didn't have a chance to tell me
You LOVED me still
I guess its true
If you love someone
Tell them in that monemt
Don't wait til its too late
Because you never know
You could have just missed
Your one and only chance
To be with the one you love
| On July 28th 2007 AmberDawnnX Said : | |
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a little longer then i like i think you over did the line brakes but other then that its good |
| On July 26th 2007 thekillerheart Said : | |
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this is sweet.. and sad... i hate it when we (i mean we as guys)say lets take a break :-\ .. its dumb.. but your right tell ppl how much you care about them or feel about them at the momment |
| On July 25th 2007 WHJHchick Said : | |
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I don't know if ne one will like this but plz tell me if you do!! |


