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Just a poem I came up with, Enjoy :PRate this Poem
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Serenity
A sliver of air escaped my lips
A gasp once confined now danced on the wind
Visible to all and none, the ice within it
Giving it away
There she was, a tragedy
Her being once lit, now full of a blackness
That extinguished her very soul
Death. Crept forth from a world unknown
A slumber in eternal death. Cobble stone streets underneath her form
I cannot help but watch this world from afar
I weep silent fallen tears
Yet still, Over her body
Something to behold
With the darkness of death still creeping from below
A light, first a slit then a beam from above
What is this light?
What is this light that chases the darkness away?
Fingers reaching, wanting
A single hand, tender and pure
I watch as it descends like a dove falling gracefully from the light
A face, beautiful and glorious
Eyes full of benevolence, Her lips parted into a sweet smile
She touched the dead, her light causing the once dead to glow
With a light of her very own.
My tears cease their fall from grace
My eyes behold the miracle, but I stand still, disbelieving
Eyes flutter from their eternal sleep
A renewed breath flows into her very soul
What was once disbelieve turns into Joy. She is renewed.
| On September 14th 2007 sunny102 Said : | |
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Simply beautiful and moving...wonderful work from you yet again! |
| On September 8th 2007 Qurmudjin Said : | |
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Wow. "There she was, a tragedy." This poem has a Gothic yet modern feel, not overburdening us with archaic language but still evoking a dreamlike, past time. |
| On September 7th 2007 dureall Said : | |
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great read. your work is truly inspiring. |
| On September 6th 2007 PunkTurk17 Said : | |
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I likedededed it. |
| On September 5th 2007 amptone Said : | |
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good read! |
| On September 5th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Wow...Really powerful, I love your word choice |
| On September 5th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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wow, amazing...........................................................................Just...WOW, thats all I can think of to say! |
| On September 5th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Awesome poem, you are really talented. |
| On September 5th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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She is reborn. WOW!!! I felt this entire poem. Amazingly worded and written. This is incredible! |
| On September 5th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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wowwwwwwww amazinggggg |


