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A Tale of The Worlds Comet

Views (235) Tragedy Created on 8-22-07 Flag
Drinking up the worlds essence

In a way its beauty inhabits you

Natures’ song is contagious

But Humans’ drum is not

Like dark smog and clean air

The two worlds collide.

There are no winners though.

Just a path of failure

That leads to our own destruction.

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On September 14th 2007 sunny102 Said :
sunny102 Your poems are so well written and thought out. I love your view on our world...so true...scary too!
On September 3rd 2007 pru1989 Said :
pru1989 wow. wow brillent ballence great choice of adjectives wow I really love it!
On August 28th 2007 Qurmudjin Said :
Qurmudjin Dark reflections. Made me think of the line "I think it's kind of funny, I think it's kind of sad, the dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had." In other words, it is sometimes in our darkest reflections that we can see the way to the light.
On August 27th 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang ooohhh,, true,,, quite true,,, very nicely written,, this is well made,,, altho at one point in the middle i got abit obscurred... but the ending made things clearer,,, very good job! ^___^ ~~~~~~~Pang
On August 24th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 Love the descriptions and comparisons. Very powerful poem. Great job!
On August 24th 2007 PunkTurk17 Said :
PunkTurk17 As everyone else as said, it's true. So sadly true. But, I still believe so long as even just one cares, and even hopes, the world shall live.
On August 23rd 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Gets kinda pessimistic towards the end, but still well written. "Natures’ song is contagious" is my favourite line.
On August 22nd 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said :
Xpoetxgurlx awesome! =D i love it, so so true =]
On August 22nd 2007 tara62 Said :
tara62 truer words between the lines, its a frighting thought to think our world is dying,
On August 22nd 2007 paintshoppro Said :
paintshoppro wow, its amazing..its so true..! we are doing nothing to give back to this earth..and everything to destroy it..!!!
On August 22nd 2007 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter wonderful work