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death to all
i watched you die in this retched place,
i seen the hurt in your face....
as the tears fell from my eyes i seen the thing i truely despise.
i cried out my heart just for you, now i know what i must do....
death for those who wish it now,slow and painful i love the sound....
breaking bones in thier face, i show no mercy to thier race.
i locked the door behind me now, but still i hear that wonderful sound....
they scream for help that shall never come, never it does for any one....
| On October 17th 2007 TheSam44 Said : | |
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nice |
| On September 29th 2007 assumetheworst Said : | |
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i love this its so deep...^^ great work |
| On June 21st 2007 cjaskot Said : | |
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i love the last line, it is extremly true. |


