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Views (1919) Anger Created on 7-15-06 Flag
I think I met an angel. She fell out from the sky.
I don't know why she came here. I didn't ask her why.
She seems to be so perfect in every single way.
My love keeps growing deeper for her each and every day.
When we first met eachother, I knew she was too good to be true.
I think that Im mistaken. I think she's here for you.
I'm not worthy of her presense. Im not worthy of her cause.
I dont want to stumble in her life when mine is still on pause.
She is kind hearted and lovely. Her voice is music to my ears.
She sings for me a song, that makes me break down into tears.
I want her to know my feelings. These feelings are so strong.
I dont know how to express them. So I pour them in a song.
However, poetry is still feeble. It can only say so much.
Thats why I make every single word I say just real enough to touch.

But my main point is just stating that if you really are in love,
You'd make her feel as special as she did way up above.
And never let a tear drop. Because angels dont need pain.
They've done so much for us and we should not leave them in vain.
I want to keep my angel. And I hope that she wants me.
But my angel already has someone, and unfortunately, its not me.
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On March 14th 2008 Omegaangeldee Said :
Omegaangeldee Wow... that was awesome... I didn't expect the ending... love it!
On March 9th 2008 Xaynos Said :
Xaynos Wow...not many people are as strong as you. I love this poem, good job.
On December 12th 2007 Kenshiko Said :
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awww it's so sweet, but why is it in the anger section. I really like it though
On December 5th 2007 siriwolf Said :
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this is a sweet poem. sad though. I would be angry as well.
On November 17th 2007 ImmortalMax13 Said :
ImmortalMax13 WHEN U R READING THIS DONT STOP OR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN MY NAME IS SUMMER I AM 15 YEARS OLD i have BLONDE HAIR , SCARS no NOSE OR EARS I AM DEAD IF U DONT COPY THIS JUS LIKE FROM THE RING COPY N POST THIS ON 5 MORE SITES OR I WILL APPEAR ONE CREEPY NIGHT WEN UR NOT ExPECTING IT BY YOUR BED WITH A NIFE AND KILL U THIS IS NO JOKE SUMMET ING GOOD WILL HAPPEN TO U IF YOU POST THIS ON 5 MORE FLASH BOXES
On November 1st 2007 sabrina225 Said :
sabrina225 I LOVE THIS POEM....LOVE IS SOO MYSTERIOUS...AND WELL ITS ONE EVERYONE SHOULD TRY AND SOLVE....IM SORRY THAT YOU WERENT THE ONE FOR HER...BUT SHE IS THE ONE MISSEN OUT ON SUCH A GREAT GUY...NOT MANY PEOPLE CAN SIT DOWN AND DO WHAT YOU JUST DID...WHICH WAS PUT YOUR FEELINGS DOWN ON PAPER AND MAKE A MASTERPIECE WITH WORDS.....I LOVE IT THIS ONE JUST GIVES ME GOOSEBUMPS
On July 27th 2007 weirdo15 Said :
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awesome, u rly respect girls . wow u mite b one of a kind !! lol wrdo15 xx
On July 17th 2007 margorie Said :
margorie it wonderful
On July 7th 2007 crazybabyG69 Said :
crazybabyG69 how sweet you know how to treat a girl and i like that.
On June 6th 2007 kyleeloveshim Said :
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aww i'm sorry.. is it still true?
On April 9th 2007 TennisMoe Said :
TennisMoe Aww, that's so sweet. That's how you get the girl of your dreams. I wish my boyfriend wrote me poems... lol
On March 12th 2007 ericatorres1 Said :
ericatorres1 Hey i love this poem it was really great......
On February 12th 2007 Crazzygurl212 Said :
Crazzygurl212 Amazing Poem!!!
On January 24th 2007 KINGOF69N Said :
KINGOF69N DUDE I FEEL YA MAN... IM GOING THROUGH THA SAME $h!+... GOOD POEM...
On January 18th 2007 SarahJo85 Said :
SarahJo85 Great poem. It's nice to know men have feeling like this.
On January 5th 2007 tastemyblood Said :
tastemyblood it's good...reminds me of a time i went through. awesome, i love it.
On December 20th 2006 misstitch Said :
misstitch Incredible, I love it. Thanks!
On December 20th 2006 rebelnightwolf Said :
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hey i thought that was a great poem i like it
On December 19th 2006 HEYLEEROX4 Said :
HEYLEEROX4 THiS iS AWS0M3
On December 9th 2006 alainasmom12 Said :
alainasmom12 beautiful
On December 4th 2006 kaspeer Said :
kaspeer i realy like this poem. I relate to it completley
On December 1st 2006 Singleone2die4 Said :
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aww this poem is one that i really like...this makes me thin about many important people and the angels that i have....it was lovely
On November 13th 2006 Btrokendreams6 Said :
Btrokendreams6 i love it!
On September 10th 2006 randyc Said :
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that poem is really good, It has captured so much of what is happening to me right now