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We Fight For You
Walking through the burning sands under my feet;
Wondering if we will see victory, or if we'll see defeat.
Knowing that we're risking our lives to fight for another man;
Hoping our Admirals and Generals thoroughly researched this plan.
Never knowing if we'll make it home to see our families;
Only knowing that we're out to kill off foreign enemies.
We've shed blood in Iraq, and we've shed blood in Kuwait;
There is only one who will determine what is to become our fate.
Here we fight with one another. Our soldiers fighting back-to-back;
One man carrying the Ensign, the other carrying the Jack.
Gazing up at the bright sun as it glows a bloodshot red;
Knowing you can not go home until these terrorists are dead.
Thinking about our beloved families with tears streaming down their cheeks;
Never knowing what you're doing up in foreign mountain peeks.
And when we finally come home, we will be heroes. We'll be great;
Although many never returned. They were slain in either Iraq or Kuwait.
| On June 10th 2008 Godsbabygirl Said : | |
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Thank you! My man is a Marine and his sister's in the Army. My brother is joining the Navy and so is one of my best friends. This was a beautiful poem sir. God bless you more. |
| On June 8th 2008 kitkat298 Said : | |
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I love this.
I wish there was no reason for you to fight. |
| On May 28th 2008 AiyanaMaKi Said : | |
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Thank you for fighting! Thank you for sharing. It'd be nice if more people understood, "on their shores or ours" (can you tell I'm Navy?). May you arrive home safely. You are not forgotten, nor alone. |
| On May 2nd 2008 Foreverlyn Said : | |
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Glad you take the time to write and portray the life of a soldier, yet words are enough to describe the things you and the others, go through on a daily basis. Blessings. |
| On March 29th 2008 Frostcoversros Said : | |
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i thank you for all you do. you are amazing |
| On March 24th 2008 dancergirly96 Said : | |
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your poems are amazing! you are awesome at writing!!! |
| On January 29th 2008 bootyful16 Said : | |
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OMG, that is the best poem ive read in a long time, you have a lot of heart and courage. it gives me chills everytime i read it. hope you return home safely.. :) |
| On January 17th 2008 sugarrox Said : | |
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good poem but i would reconsider the text, ow |
| On January 11th 2008 DocBrown91 Said : | |
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It's an incredibly moving poem, but it's a pain to read when the text is bright blue on white.
Aside from that, thanks for the literature and the protection. |
| On December 5th 2007 siriwolf Said : | |
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this is a great poem!
you did an awesome job, I fully support our men and women of the military be they at war or here at home. My sister is goin to join the military soon and I have her back. take care |
| On December 2nd 2007 xxSnickers07xx Said : | |
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This poem is amazing and made me think of my brother. He is back in Iraq. Third time over seas and it's scary as hell for everyone here. I can't even picture how it is for everyone over there. Although I dont know much about the stuff that is going on i know i dont support this war but i do support our troops. I give them the most respect. They deserve it. |
| On November 26th 2007 gabbyzkrazy23 Said : | |
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love this poem nd hope you guyz are safe out there |
| On November 16th 2007 XBewareTenX Said : | |
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I loved this poem, It made me think of my Cousins Fiancee who is in Iraq right now for his third time, We all hope he will make it back to marry her! :)
We are all very grateful to him and I am greatful to you for giving me the chance to read this and show him that someone still cares :)
Thank You! |
| On November 14th 2007 thatboihurtme Said : | |
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Correction:
And please pay no attention to those WHO only intend to bring you down.
My Bad :] |
| On November 14th 2007 thatboihurtme Said : | |
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your poems are so good !!
keept it up ! And please pay no attention to those you only intend to bring you down. You can write about anything you feel in your heart. :] |
| On November 1st 2007 sabrina225 Said : | |
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VERY VERY VERY GOOD I LOVE IT....MAKES ME THINK OF MY BROTHER AND SISTER THEY ARE IN THE FORCES....BROTHER IS A MARINE AND SISTER IS IN THE AIR FORCE |
| On October 31st 2007 bballstar70 Said : | |
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i love your poems=] there great!!! |
| On October 16th 2007 lostforever01 Said : | |
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Man, this poem and more like it are needed to let ppl know what is really going on. Bless you guys, and make it home safe, damn it. Hooya. |
| On October 16th 2007 navy707 Said : | |
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Coming from a military girlfriend, I want to say thank you for writing that! It touched my heart and I'm praying constantly for this all to be over. Despite what some people think, you guys (and girls) that are serving our country are doing amazing things with what you've been given. I don't know what goes on, nor do I think I really want to know ever. But again, from everyone that can't say it or are too fricking stupid to realize it, THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING YOU HAVE DONE! |
| On September 4th 2007 jessenajarro93 Said : | |
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god bless ya if it wernt fo evry soilder and marine out there we would all be slaves i wish you good luck and to come home safe |
| On August 26th 2007 kiaraluvszee1 Said : | |
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Good luck out there!
-to all those risking their lives for this wonderful country |
| On August 20th 2007 TillTheLastDay Said : | |
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Great poem.
I wish them all luck to return home safe and sound. :]
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| On August 14th 2007 kay0ur0bffl Said : | |
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This is amazing it really touches me! Beacues one of my very close cousins died in Iraq and he promised me he would return home but he didnt! I jut wisj i got to see him and tell him i love him just one more time i never dreamed that me would not make it make it back. And also it touches me because my sister is going to Iraq she is in Cail. for her tranning and I don't want her to go cuz I dont want to loose her to! I cry every night because I dont want her to go but just keep her in your prayers and thiank you so much! ur an amazing person adn god bless u |
| On August 6th 2007 Zappa31 Said : | |
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this is amazing! I love your poem...You should consider publishing! |
| On August 6th 2007 pinkheffalump Said : | |
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NO MORE WAR! ANTI-WAR! NO MORE WAR! NO MORE, NO MORE, NO MORE!! LOVE THIS THO! |


