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A dedication to my Brother

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I once had nothing. I was a lonely young guy; I prayed every day. I thought I would die.
A life filled with pain. With agony, and fear; I cried every day, but noone could hear.
But suddenly one day, I guess a prayer broke through; because my pain went away, and my fear did too. At that time, I was 18. I was no longer a baby; So I packed up, and shipped out, and now I'm in the navy. But now I'm still crying at least 3 times a day; I have noone out here, and my closest friend is 7 states away. I think that I'm just pitiful, and I have myself to blame; To watch a grown man cry like that just makes me so ashamed. I'm now on a naval ship, and I'll sail the ocean blue; We've already got Saddam Hussein, but we'll get Bin Laden too. Always remember I'll be there. I'll never leave you alone; Anytime you may need my help, I'll come rushing home. I got a brother to protect, and a sister-in-law too; I'll serve my country in the process, but I'm doing this for you...
 I love you bro.
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On October 12th 2008 USMCSISTER1 Said :
USMCSISTER1 I LOVE THIS! ITS SO SWEET. I HAVE A BROTHER WHO IS IN THE MARINES AND HAS ALREADY SPENT TIME IN IRAQ AND IS GETTING READY TO GO BACK. HE HAS JUST TURNED 20 YEARS OLD AND HE HAS MOMENTS LIKE THIS, ESPECIALLY WHEN HE FIRST JOINED AND LEFT. I ALSO HAVE A BROTHER IN THE ARMY WHO HAS SPENT TIME IN KOREA AND HE HAS DONE THE SAME. I REALLY LIKE WHAT YOU PUT IN HERE. IT JUST SHOWS THAT YOU LOVE YOUR COUNTRY AND YOUR FAMILY! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND GOD BLESS YOU WHEREVER YOU ARE! ~KAYLA~
On July 22nd 2008 Natalyi Said :
Natalyi Good work I agree with them all
On June 26th 2008 stevenpullen3 Said :
stevenpullen3 i thought it was a great poem, it made me tear up a little bit, good work keep it up=D
On June 16th 2008 8697duncangirl Said :
8697duncangirl *tear* omg that is soo sad and never forget we all apreciate what you do for our country keep it up plz
On June 10th 2008 pears101 Said :
pears101 I was tearing up, this poem gave me goosebumps. I love it, keep 'em coming
On May 22nd 2008 bingobritney Said :
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this poem gave me goosebumps...thers not many that do that...respect to you xxx
On May 7th 2008 misssweetiepie Said :
misssweetiepie LOVE IT...Keep em' coming!!
On April 11th 2008 Carolgreen Said :
Carolgreen oo thats hott!!!!
On April 8th 2008 laurita2010 Said :
laurita2010 wow this was great it was very touching aswome \ keep up the good work
On March 6th 2008 lilkrnmofo Said :
lilkrnmofo FINALLY SOMETHING THAT'S NOT ABOUT SEX OR PETTY 14-YEAR-OLD ROMANCE!! good job, keep it up.
On February 4th 2008 jeff2625 Said :
jeff2625 you are a very good writer...I love this poem..so much feeling into it...there is nothing wrong with crying..it helps free the soul...keep writing..good job..
On February 1st 2008 A2thaT Said :
A2thaT That was the first poem i've ever read that has put me in tears My brother is my bestfriend but he's gone
On January 26th 2008 xXCROSSXx Said :
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That was truely amazing. I have two brothers in the Infantry. One is now paralyzed with an honorable discharge, the other just returned home from 14-18 months in Iraq. I'll be sure to show this to them. I'm sure they'll love it.
On January 14th 2008 alysha7hearts Said :
alysha7hearts wow . . .that one kinda got to me n i dont even really no any1 in the navy . . .but thanx 4 everything!!!!!!
On January 14th 2008 alysha7hearts Said :
alysha7hearts wow . . .that one kinda got to me n i dont even really no any1 in the navy . . .but thanx 4 everything!!!!!!
On January 14th 2008 AAdropout Said :
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That was a very sweet heart felt peom.
On January 7th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I just submitted a poem I wrote only days after the 9/11 attack called "Freedom Sweet Freedom". I would love for you to have a peek, as it was you who defended this freedom for us all. Many thanks!
On December 30th 2007 rotcnazi11 Said :
rotcnazi11 i love i. i actually started to cry b/c my sis wants to join the navy. and i'm scared for her. i really am.
On December 18th 2007 VampsLover Said :
VampsLover ...My lil bro wants to join the navy and be on the front lines of the enemy where he can see the pain as he robs them of their lives as they had done to our country.... thank you.....
On November 22nd 2007 Andie420 Said :
Andie420 That was really good!
On November 17th 2007 Seniorsgirl07 Said :
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God Bless you!!!! you got great talent and I hope u the best of luck!!!!
On November 8th 2007 fifthavodka Said :
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very good and there is no shame in a man cring cuz it takes a real man to show his feelings
On November 1st 2007 sabrina225 Said :
sabrina225 THIS IS OHH SOO SWEET AND MAN YOU GOT TALENT THIS IS REALLY GOOD
On October 19th 2007 sk8gold2010 Said :
sk8gold2010 OMG i LOVED it! Yes I have family overseas and this helps to remember there is reason we are there and we need to be there. WOW your such an amazing poet. Keep it up =)
On October 8th 2007 lifeis2short Said :
lifeis2short I loved it I have 3 brothers oversea's and this is a good reminder of why they're serving