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Angel In Disguise
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Created on 6-8-07
Everytime I look into your eyes, I want to melt. There are no words that can describe all these feelings I have felt. You've done so much for me, and I appreciate this a lot. You're absolutely everything that other girls are not. I know you're tired of these games, so lets try a new hand. Push all those boys out of the way, I want to be your man. I know you've been through pain and tears, but all those days are gone. I'll change your life to paradise before the break of dawn. I used to have your problems too, so I started to pray. I wished for someone I could see myself with every day. I never asked for too much, just someone that I could hold. Someone that I could snuggle up with when the nights get really cold. Then suddenly, I realized it has already been done. I've been fighting in a long lost war that's already been won. You've been here with me all along, and I didn't even know it. You are an angel in disguise, but you never seemed to show it. I knew you were unusual in a very pleasant way. But I didn't want to tell you. I did not know what to say. But I caught on to your secret. And I caught on fairly fast. An angel with such a perfect body, and the cutest little ass smile. Now I realize how much I love you. And I told you I did too. And every time I prayed for an angel, I really prayed for you.
Please Login to post comments| On February 16th 2008 thepanther1320 Said : | |
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this is really a good poem, the rhyming and rythm are great! im really impressed! |
| On February 11th 2008 shady117 Said : | |
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tight dude |
| On November 14th 2007 thatboihurtme Said : | |
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you write sooo well !!
its amazing ! |
| On June 23rd 2007 lisajoann88 Said : | |
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i love it! its so good! easy to relate to and very well written! |
| On June 15th 2007 charming8 Said : | |
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♥ it... |
| On June 12th 2007 leafyprincess Said : | |
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that is SWEET! xx |
| On June 10th 2007 08reppa Said : | |
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lol das deep. very good. :) |
| On June 10th 2007 demongrl15 Said : | |
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Loved it! Very good! |
| On June 9th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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i love it!!!! you did a great job with displaying your emotion throughout this poem. wow... yeah great job |
| On June 9th 2007 rockerfew Said : | |
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aww... this is really really really really really really really good... i loved it... |
