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Created on 3-18-08
Her beauty drives me to lust for her,Yet her grace calms my soul and forces me to love her.Willing to give her the world but limited to the powers of a mear man.Seemingly flawless and pure, but her temptations pulls u into a state of exdicy.Her eyes show pain unimaginable,though she goes through life as if she does not know the word.Yet shes tainted grazeing the line of perfection........shes unique
Please Login to post comments| On March 18th 2008 october1015 Said : | |
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It's good, needs more work. You have spelling errors; next time spell check it. I don't think you should use text language, it just just cheapens the poem, and makes you seem illiterate. I also think you should have it in the form of stanzas and not just one big paragraph. Keep improving. |
| On March 18th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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Wow! That's really deep! I love it! |
| On March 18th 2008 Uniquemind7 Said : | |
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unique love |
