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When I hear
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Created on 6-28-07
When I hear your voice my heart starts to pound, my body tenses, butterflies flutter around in my belly. My mind fills up with wonder. To hear your voice is like seeing you for the first time and wondering what your name is. To hear you call out is like when you are reaching out to help me up of the ground from falling. You voice rises me up when I'm down in the dumps. To hear you is the same way when I see you and to see you is the same way to feel your touch. It's all indescribable… It's to were I don't know what to think or how to act or what am I supposed to do.
By: TwinCult (Written after the pt2 if only poem to and about my special someone, your in my heart every day that I live. your my friend, my best friend, my everything)
Please Login to post comments| On June 29th 2007 angelofwar4 Said : | |
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Sure sounds like you deeply love this guy! Good work, you convey your feelings very well. |
| On June 29th 2007 Twincult Said : | |
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Yes my friend and I do have a really good relationship we understand each other and we don't judge one another for what we have gone thru or mistankes that we have made. so its the best to have such a great friend that you can look to for help or to just have some laughs with. he's awesome |
| On June 28th 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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wonderful work |
| On June 28th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Your poems just amaze me....you must have a really good relationship with this friend. |
