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My Bloody Tears
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Created on 9-5-07
I feel how much you are in pain and it hurts me. I used to cry plane ol' tears, now the pain is worse. The tears are different.
Your going through a tough time and I wish I could be there for you, wish I could take all your pain away.
We don't talk much anymore, I wish we did.
The tears that I cry come from you. You may not know it, but it's true.
When I cry I have the feeling as if it's blood and it is running out. When I cough I cough up the blood that comes from you.
Is this a bad thing? No not to me. Just means that I'm finally apart of you and can feel your pain.
I never got to tell you how I truely felt about you. I love you and I know you wont read thing or get this in time, you will find out that I love you.
Please Login to post comments| On April 12th 2008 smily6135023 Said : | |
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Hey I really like this, it shows that your a strong person and that you also would give up your shirt on your back to a stranger... really reminds me of me... I also like that art on your profile... amazing... and if you remember leaving me a comment on the end of the world poem I wrote. I do believe in that strongly.. Those are words from my heart....
And I also wanted to thank you for critiquing my work... it feels good to get some feed back now and then.... |
| On March 11th 2008 Twincult Said : | |
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thanks you guys, taht means a lot to me. im glad you think my writing is good. |
| On February 27th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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wow that's an amazingly strong poem. It reminds me so much of myself sometiems. Awesome!!
If you have time i'd appreciate it if you could look through some of my work. |
| On December 28th 2007 bonita1510 Said : | |
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wow i really like this one ists very good |
