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Without An Exit (Redone)
With eyes glinting in the distance
Those about to awaken are waiting
Invited to the night castle
Into the empty shell of transient dwellers
Without an Exit
If you mean to endure the shock
To the point of crumbling
Show me the lies
The light I still can’t reach and where it’s gone
Let’s sketch out the brilliantly dancing thoughts
So that the guiding words do not spill over
Don’t fear the changing times
Without an Exit
It crumbles apart
You’ve been reborn
Your eyes alone light up without a smile
Even if the world you want…suddenly turns to ashes
There will still be miracles
The light I can’t reach and where it’s gone
Let’s sketch out the brilliantly dancing thoughts
So that the guiding words do not spill over
Don’t fear the changing times
Embrace me gently
Hold me forever more
So you’ll even break my soul
| On August 8th 2007 charissa14 Said: |
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| this is my definate favorite! its VERY well written! i absolutely love it! |
| On July 28th 2007 Cellestra Said: |
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| ... (redone?)... a place to enter with caution and survive with care... I like this. |
| On July 23rd 2007 realpaintheory Said: |
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| You have an amazing way with words, I love it. |


