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Created: 07/22 2007
Views: 103
Category: Other

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Without An Exit (Redone)

With eyes glinting in the distance

Those about to awaken are waiting

Invited to the night castle

Into the empty shell of transient dwellers 

Without an Exit 

If you mean to endure the shock

To the point of crumbling

Show me the lies 

The light I still can’t reach and where it’s gone

Let’s sketch out the brilliantly dancing thoughts

So that the guiding words do not spill over

Don’t fear the changing times 

Without an Exit

It crumbles apart 

You’ve been reborn

Your eyes alone light up without a smile

Even if the world you want…suddenly turns to ashes

There will still be miracles

The light I can’t reach and where it’s gone 

Let’s sketch out the brilliantly dancing thoughts

So that the guiding words do not spill over

Don’t fear the changing times 

Embrace me gently

Hold me forever more

So you’ll even break my soul

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On August 8th 2007 charissa14 Said: 
charissa14 this is my definate favorite! its VERY well written! i absolutely love it!
On July 28th 2007 Cellestra Said: 
Cellestra ... (redone?)... a place to enter with caution and survive with care... I like this.
On July 23rd 2007 realpaintheory Said: 
realpaintheory You have an amazing way with words, I love it.