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i just wrote this, fairly crappy!!Rate this Poem
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Created:
07/14 2007
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207
Category:
Other
My Poems
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65
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Explain Love |
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38
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Friends No More |
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70
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Depression |
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24
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Just Once |
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24
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You left me |
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23
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How Could he? |
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27
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As Sane as the blood on my wrists |
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22
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I have to try |
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25
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Pain |
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23
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How Life Goes |
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22
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Be Honest |
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23
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Why |
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20
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Its your turn to tell me |
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untitled (needs a title) |
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No One |
I am Free
I didnt know how to move on
when you said our relationship was through
because everyday i thought of how
how I yearned for you.
I stayed out in the rain
so it would wash away my tears
but you were still in my head
along with the rest of my fears
When you wouldnt talk to me
it felt like my wounds were rubbed with salt
I hated myself for a year
before i realised it wasnt my fault
Another year has passed
with only faded thoughts of you
i no longer cry, yearn or fight
because i know now what to do
You will always be a great memory
and thats all you are to me
because now that i am stronger
i know that i am free
| On September 30th 2007 lisaljb Said: |
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| Incredible poem, great piece of fluential rythm and such. |
| On July 17th 2007 LaveMoofin33 Said: |
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| i think you're wrong... its not fairly crappy.. on the contrary it's really good. |
| On July 15th 2007 guffa78 Said: |
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| love it.....great work |
| On July 15th 2007 Suddenlyx216 Said: |
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| mazing |
| On July 14th 2007 jwoody1980 Said: |
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| its good |
| On July 14th 2007 fgggfx Said: |
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| this is really good, great rythem with a happy ending to it |
| On July 14th 2007 NaomiElizabeth Said: |
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| Nice poem I can relate |


