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i just wrote this, fairly crappy!!

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Created: 07/14 2007
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Category: Other

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I am Free

I didnt know how to move on
when you said our relationship was through
because everyday i thought of how
how I yearned for you.

I stayed out in the rain
so it would wash away my tears
but you were still in my head
along with the rest of my fears

When you wouldnt talk to me
it felt like my wounds were rubbed with salt
I hated myself for a year
before i realised it wasnt my fault

Another year has passed
with only faded thoughts of you
i no longer cry, yearn or fight
because i know now what to do

You will always be a great memory
and thats all you are to me
because now that i am stronger
i know that i am free

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On September 30th 2007 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Incredible poem, great piece of fluential rythm and such.
On July 17th 2007 LaveMoofin33 Said: 
LaveMoofin33 i think you're wrong... its not fairly crappy.. on the contrary it's really good.
On July 15th 2007 guffa78 Said: 
guffa78 love it.....great work
On July 15th 2007 Suddenlyx216 Said: 
Suddenlyx216 mazing
On July 14th 2007 jwoody1980 Said: 
jwoody1980 its good
On July 14th 2007 fgggfx Said: 
fgggfx this is really good, great rythem with a happy ending to it
On July 14th 2007 NaomiElizabeth Said: 
NaomiElizabeth Nice poem I can relate