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yeah this sux!Rate this Poem
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Created:
03/18 2007
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455
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Other
My Poems
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Explain Love |
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38
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Friends No More |
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70
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Depression |
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24
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Just Once |
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24
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You left me |
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How Could he? |
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27
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As Sane as the blood on my wrists |
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22
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I have to try |
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25
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Pain |
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23
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How Life Goes |
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22
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Be Honest |
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23
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Why |
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Its your turn to tell me |
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untitled (needs a title) |
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No One |
Goodbye to you
I knew i had to say goodbye
Goodbye to everything that i knew
You were the one i loved
but i had to say goodbye to you.
Of all the things i believed in
I thought our love was true
But when things got a little tough
you just said goodbye too
It hurt all the time
to want you and not have you
Goodbye was the hardest word to say
because i knew it was the end of us two
You were the one i tried to hold on to
But i knew that goodbye was the end
I cant believe it ended just like that
so goodbye to you my friend.
Please Login to post comments| On March 18th 2007 2weezy Said: |
| this peomis the way i feel right now. it like when you lose someone you love so much that you would give up your life if they just ask, thanks this peom i really good |
| On March 18th 2007 neomud Said: |
| the rhythm of the poem isn't steady, but it is still good. |
| On March 18th 2007 NickCamp Said: |
| i like this one because i have no hope ha no im joking |
| On March 18th 2007 500nets Said: |
| pretty good, try to steer clear of the cliche's like "love is true" |
