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Created: 03/07 2007
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Category: Other

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I have won

I made it through the dark days
The days when everything went wrong
the days when all i wanted to do was die
But now i realise im strong

I didnt know what to do
I didnt know how to handle the pain
I thought i was all alone
the pain making me feel insane

I've stopped crying my heart out
You are finally out of my head
You'll always remain in my heart
but I no longer wish i was dead

I no longer feel guilty
to want to move on with my life
i no longer feel like everything i do is wrong
because it no longer cuts me like a knife

I have the freedom to move on
as im sure you have already done
but to get past this barrier of my life
i know i have won!

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On May 9th 2007 deadpoet Said: 
deadpoet very well written, like it a lot
On March 23rd 2007 cocopuff2005 Said: 
cocopuff2005 Omfg wow like i can relate to that so much.. wow