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Created: 01/14 2009
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Category: Pain

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Dead without you
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Watching you

Dead without you

A girl stands in the hall

He smiles at her like nothing happened at all

Her heart was broken; she was in despair

She was in love, but he didn't care

Thoughts of suicide go through her head

"Without you I'd be dead"

So please, keep me a live for a little while"

Across his face comes another heartless smile

He turned his back to her and walked away

Tears run down her face; She has nothing left to say

She went home saying she felt ill

When she got home she swallowed a bottle of pills

Before she died, she wrote a suicide letter

She wrote it to him saying she knew he deserved better

And at the bottom written in red:

"I told you without you I'd be dead"

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On January 14th 2009 bobfarted Said: 
bobfarted that is sick but in a good way this poem is very touching
On January 14th 2009 Stolensoul16 Said: 
Stolensoul16 This is so wonderful! keep writing.
On January 14th 2009 Relica123 Said: 
Relica123 Wow this is amazing. :D