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Created:
01/14 2009
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Pain
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Dead without you
A girl stands in the hall
He smiles at her like nothing happened at all
Her heart was broken; she was in despair
She was in love, but he didn't care
Thoughts of suicide go through her head
"Without you I'd be dead"
So please, keep me a live for a little while"
Across his face comes another heartless smile
He turned his back to her and walked away
Tears run down her face; She has nothing left to say
She went home saying she felt ill
When she got home she swallowed a bottle of pills
Before she died, she wrote a suicide letter
She wrote it to him saying she knew he deserved better
And at the bottom written in red:
"I told you without you I'd be dead"
| On January 14th 2009 bobfarted Said: |
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| that is sick but in a good way
this poem is very touching |
| On January 14th 2009 Stolensoul16 Said: |
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| This is so wonderful! keep writing. |
| On January 14th 2009 Relica123 Said: |
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| Wow this is amazing. :D |


