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short but sweet... please comment =)Rate this Poem
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If I die...
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Created on 1-28-08
If I die before I wake
that's one less breath I'll have to take
If I die before tomorrow
that's one less day that's filled with sorrow
If I die before day break
that's one less smile I'll have to fake
If I die before you do
that's one less lifetime to spend with you
Please Login to post comments| On July 7th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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Short but sweet yes, but it conveys a message. Good job |
| On January 30th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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this is really deep and good, short and to the point... love it lots |
| On January 30th 2008 sophiarock15 Said : | |
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i love it! its not depperessing its beautifully true! u have real passion! i'mawrite this one down! i love this!
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| On January 29th 2008 ALynn1214 Said : | |
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really good! |
| On January 29th 2008 Lelianna Said : | |
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It's depressing. |
| On January 29th 2008 BUrSelf112189 Said : | |
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wow... that was really good! write more! |
| On January 29th 2008 listen147 Said : | |
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aww,, so much emotion put into so little words
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| On January 29th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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short but really good...i like this : ) |
| On January 29th 2008 gaaraxtoph Said : | |
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wow i likey :) |
