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Sweet Dreams |
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Late Night Walk |
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Quote |
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Unrelenting thoughts |
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Who is to blame? |
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Acceptance |
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Infinite Turmoil |
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Perfectly Damaged |
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I’M NOT WORTH IT… I PROMISE |
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My Personal Obstruction |
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So Very Few... |
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WHY DO I TRY? |
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I AM SORRY... |
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If I die... |
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I am sorry Daddy... |
I’M NOT WORTH IT… I PROMISE
Don’t bother to care
It’s just a waste of time
Telling me you love me
Such a foolish crime
I do not deserve the praise
You give with every breath
For in the end I’m nothing
All I am worthy of is death
You try to convince me I’m wrong
As you fight the urge to cry
Don’t you see I’m insignificant
Your plea, my lullaby
I promise you will thank me
This is for the best
Go on and live your life
Give your heart a rest
Can’t you see the truth
Behind the ridiculous lie
Just turn your back and walk away
All you have to do is try
Forget all about me
Do not care anymore
I know you can do it
I’ve done it once before
I am incapable of love
And the emotions it may bare
No one person has proven
That they really do care
They all leave me stranded
Isolated and broken
But here you are before me
With your arms wide open
A conflict builds within me
And it tears me apart
Should I listen to my conscious
Or follow my heart
But in the end it could be different
Maybe I’ll wait around to see
Will it be a tragic end
Or my fairytale fantasy?
| On January 29th 2008 shadyishott Said : | |
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i luv this poem i wish i can write poems like this but i cant make every thing fit like yours. i wrote one poem but i dont know if its good if u can can u read it its called THE CUT thanks!!! but im being rude ur poems are theeee best i luv them!!!!!
-SK8R GURL T_T |
| On January 15th 2008 antoinetterys Said : | |
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omg i love this .. it flows |
| On January 13th 2008 XXXPosionXXX Said : | |
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OMFG thats really good =) |
| On January 12th 2008 AgentAaron Said : | |
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its the other way around for me sometimes |
| On January 12th 2008 hayleybug21 Said : | |
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it is a very good poem but you shouldn't feel that way cause some where out there somebody cares and someone loves u even if it doesn't seem that way. |
| On January 12th 2008 carigirlof95 Said : | |
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WoW that is so good!!! |
| On January 11th 2008 Sk8ncutie001 Said : | |
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Aww i love it!!! |
| On January 11th 2008 MyHeartIsAPOW Said : | |
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absolutely wonderful! Someone feels about me that way... but its a lot harder than you think to just walk away.. |
| On January 11th 2008 bdragon175 Said : | |
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wow that was great and a lot of people have gone through that but the poem was great |
| On January 11th 2008 twilightx28 Said : | |
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Brilliant |
| On January 11th 2008 lyssajwlou Said : | |
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THis is a great poems your have really good class |
| On January 11th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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This is wonderful. I just want to reach out a give you a hug. ((((((((BigFatHug)))))))))) |
| On January 11th 2008 whisper1234 Said : | |
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awesome work! |
| On January 11th 2008 mistdarklight Said : | |
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i know the feeling. it's really well written and expressed |
| On January 11th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Amazing! Really like this one. I think you've captured the emotion excellently. |


