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Perfectly Damaged
Hold yourself together
It will not last much longer
Stay strong
It’s not the first time
It will eventually cease
Tears will no longer fall
Breathing becomes easier
The blood stops flowing
Pain becomes bearable
Pick up the pieces of your heart
Put it back together once more
Slowly regain confidence
Present your broken smile
No, do not worry
It doesn’t matter what they think
For in your eyes you’re perfect...
Perfectly Damaged at least...
| On August 9th 2008 Alli684 Said : | |
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I like this one too! |
| On January 19th 2008 me996644 Said : | |
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very good!
lots of depth... it shows personality! |
| On January 19th 2008 me996644 Said : | |
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very good!
lots of depth... it shows personality! |
| On January 16th 2008 KaosQueen Said : | |
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oh wow this is really great! nice work i love it :] |
| On January 11th 2008 blah2blah Said : | |
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Amazingly written. i enjoyed reading it!!!! |
| On January 10th 2008 bdragon175 Said : | |
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Wow the poem is great |
| On January 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Very good! Thanks for the invite. If u want to chuckle, have a peek at my "Pass the Gas Mask" haha |
| On January 10th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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I liked it! awesome |
| On January 9th 2008 Jagann Said : | |
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Wow! This was really good! It was deep! oh and thnks for the comment of mine!! |
| On January 9th 2008 Alixthetree Said : | |
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i really like it:) |
| On January 9th 2008 Trena09 Said : | |
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I hope you like it!
Please comment and rate... tell me what you think =) |


