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Just a little something I came up with..Rate this Poem
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Sweet Dreams |
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Late Night Walk |
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Quote |
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Unrelenting thoughts |
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Who is to blame? |
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Acceptance |
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Infinite Turmoil |
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Perfectly Damaged |
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I’M NOT WORTH IT… I PROMISE |
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My Personal Obstruction |
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So Very Few... |
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WHY DO I TRY? |
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I AM SORRY... |
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If I die... |
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I am sorry Daddy... |
Unrelenting thoughts
I never forgive and I will never forget
The things that I say I do not regret
The walls are now higher and the tears do not fall
The strange things is I feel nothing at all
I've really gotten use to the heart ache and pain
All of the things that have drove me insane
But this secluded place in the deepths of my mind
A very special place that only I can find
The walls are stained with ink from a tired withered pen
That writes the story of my life which is almost at it's end
This place is very lonely for there's not a soul in sight
But it's really nice and peaceful cause there's very little light
For light resembles happiness and the purity of saints
While the dark resembles sorrow and many years of hate
Here it is mysterious much like the unknown
But deep down I have this feeling....
Like this place is my real home.
| On January 11th 2008 blackrose1326 Said : | |
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this is really good, and the rhythming doesn't interfer with the message. |


