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Just a little something I came up with..

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Unrelenting thoughts

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I never forgive and I will never forget

The things that I say I do not regret

The walls are now higher and the tears do not fall

The strange things is I feel nothing at all

I've really gotten use to the heart ache and pain

All of the things that have drove me insane

But this secluded place in the deepths of my mind

A very special place that only I can find

The walls are stained with ink from a tired withered pen

That writes the story of my life which is almost at it's end

This place is very lonely for there's not a soul in sight

But it's really nice and peaceful cause there's very little light

For light resembles happiness and the purity of saints

While the dark resembles sorrow and many years of hate

Here it is mysterious much like the unknown

But deep down I have this feeling....

Like this place is my real home.

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On January 11th 2008 blackrose1326 Said :
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this is really good, and the rhythming doesn't interfer with the message.