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Hmmm.... A thinker.

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Created: 04/30 2007
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Category: Lyric

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The Dark

My elbows bent and hand in hand,
I lie here sleeping in the sand.
I wonder when my dreams will start,
Or when I’ll hear a beat of heart,
Or when I’ll see you past the dark.

I’m running low on breathing air,
but without lungs I do not care.
I’ve lost my mind, but my thinking’s clear,
And a muffled sob above me I hear.
Could it be that I’m really not here?

Has my dream started? Am I really awake?
Have I gone to sleep sad or almost irate?
I open my eyes, but it’s meshed in the night.
I feel as though I may be dead out of spite,
But then why is the light around me so bright?

     -Anthony

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On April 9th 2008 LamborghiMC Said: 
LamborghiMC meh
On May 2nd 2007 Rockstar12234 Said: 
Rockstar12234 The Ryhme in this poem is really good. The voice is clear and awesome, but i really like the hyperbole. I like refrain too.
On April 30th 2007 petabeta Said: 
petabeta Definately...it's uhm..dark...feel free to view some of mine if you get a chance.
On April 30th 2007 blutess Said: 
blutess shes right, the way u worded the words is very good. i liked it.
On April 30th 2007 101091 Said: 
101091 wow thats really deep. i like it.... i love the play on words