Torched
The tourch is lit
tis now begun
tis telling you
to hide and run
Still you stand
in open air
while others turn
to look and stare
Burning up your life inside
this was the work
of all the lies
You never cared
you never will
until you do
my life stands still
...
Tis over....
tis now begun
tis telling you
to hide and run
Still you stand
in open air
while others turn
to look and stare
Burning up your life inside
this was the work
of all the lies
You never cared
you never will
until you do
my life stands still
...
Tis over....
Please Login to post comments| On December 10th 2006 magicman7 Said: |
| Wow, great flow, very touching. I'd say the only thing is "Burning up your life inside" should be "Burning up/your life inside," just to keep the stansas consistent, but then again, this shows individuality. Very good. |
| On November 27th 2006 ilovemozart Said: |
| I really, really love this. |
