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A Rape Story
She curled up in a ball, in the darkest corner of the room.
Thinking to herself, "it will all be over soon."
As the switch came down again, she felt the burning on her thigh.
She knew she was being punished, but she just did not know, why?
"You worthless little cunt!" angrily, he screamed at her.
She pleaded for him to stop as he continued to curse.
She held up her hands as a desperate attempt to block the switch.
"Next time do your job, you useless little bitch!"
He kicked her one last time before he was satisfied,
And he left her there in the darkness, laughing at her cries.
She knew not what daddy wanted from her earlier today.
She didn't know what to do when daddy's friend said, "let's play."
When mommy was alive, play time meant she played with barbie dolls.
But apparently this guy expected her to play with his balls.
She felt disgusted inside, and she knew something was wrong.
"Yeah, you feel that baby girl. Isn't it long?"
She didn't answer him, so he slapped her across the face.
"ISN'T IT LONG!" he screamed, "yes" she guessed she should say.
"You know I like them young, how old are you my dear?"
"I'm...I'm eleven," she struggled to say between her tears.
She fought to get away, as he tried pulling her onto the bed,
But her strength could not compare to his, so she began to beg.
"Please, let me go! What do you want from me?!"
He gave her an evil smirk and replied, "Soon you will see."
He shoved her onto the bed and pulled up her T-shirt
He held her down while rubbing her breast, "This is gonna hurt."
She screamed at the top of her lungs as he began to remove her pants,
And as he slid into her, the pain was too unbearable to stand.
No matter how loud she screamed, it seemed pointless anymore.
So she just closed her eyes, and began to pray to the Lord.
Eventually, the man got off of her and pulled up his jeans.
And she just lied there, motionless, not knowing what to believe.
She felt dirty, guilty, and ashamed, as if it was all her fault.
Why was this happening to her..the answer she still sought.
Out of the corner of her eye she watch the man walk away.
He left the door opened just enough, and she could see her dad get paid.
She thought that her dad loved her, but he put her up for sell..
She didn't know where to turn to, now. Who could she possibly tell?
The only person she had left in this world, betrayed her horribly.
"God, when you took mommy..why couldn't you have taken me?"
| On May 4th 2008 wvthug Said : | |
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This is very well writen. One of the best poems I have ever read. If something like that ever happened to my daughter (when I have children) I would have to brutaly hurt the guy that did it. |
| On March 23rd 2008 fgggfx Said : | |
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wow |
| On March 13th 2008 robespierre96 Said : | |
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verrrrry well writ!!!great flow!full of great perspective!emotionally it inspired a rage in me toward the father while tugging at my heart 4 the young girl.awesome work!!!!!i too have a little girl and and the bible is correct about hurting little ones!"it would be far better to have a mill stone tied around ones neck and thrown into the sea than to have hurt one of these!if someone did this to my girls slow death would follow! |
| On March 9th 2008 LunaHail Said : | |
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Thats really good kinda sad |
| On March 5th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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I agree very raw and well written. |
| On March 5th 2008 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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This was extremely raw and gritty. You did a great job with the perspective of the victim. It really made me empathize. That father is terrible and your ending line packed a punch. Overall this is quite an impressive poem. Thank you for informing me of it. |


