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Wolf |
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A WAY OUT! |
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The Beast From within |
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Hidden Secrets |
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Run |
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Decisions 4 poems in 1 |
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In the Eyes of Our Children |
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Keep Moving On |
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The Guy From the Sky |
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The Unlawful Friend |
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A Gift To Another |
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What More Could I Do? |
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Broken |
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They Lost My Trust
My mom lost her job today. I woke up this morning...now still I lay. As I heard every single solitary word. Mom and dad began to fight. Everything outta place; just wasn't right. We all fight; you know say some things, but how many people would intend to sell thier wedding ring? To treat such a promise like nothing at all shows have much my family continues to fall. I heard dad talk about mom; how she cheated. From her I feel very concieted. The continued fighting with each other as i heard the yelling of my baby brother. It was if they didn't care. It was like the children weren't there. That alone is hard to bare. You can feel it in your heart; it tears. Then you got up for school feeling like this empty fool. As I heard mom fight and sob I've decided to go back to refereeing; my old job. Doing what I must as my parents obviously were never in love, but lust. They have simply lost their daughter's trust. |
| On April 29th 2007 PattyFannin Said : | |
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You did great. |
| On April 28th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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I think a lot of people will relate to this scene. You took an emotional risk and it paid off. |
| On April 18th 2007 guahanlocal671 Said : | |
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its never easy, watching, listenng, taking inn, all the arguemments, disputes, tht parents have, but yet they dont realize, wht they do, reflects on there children and not just amongst themselves |
| On April 18th 2007 kathryn1212 Said : | |
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Every couple fights. That is part of life. No one wants to believe that they will ever be in this situation but it happens. Love and family is about mistakes and forgiveness...it's about give and take. No relationship is perfect...it's life. |
| On April 18th 2007 aewer Said : | |
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this is actually really good.
especially the last two lines. |
| On April 18th 2007 carolrenee23 Said : | |
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I just want to say i have been there and well selling a wedding ring omg |
| On April 18th 2007 DragOnzHeart Said : | |
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This is very sad..i dont want that to ever ever happen to meeeeeee!! Nice poem |
| On April 18th 2007 glamourgore Said : | |
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Ouch, not a fun situation but one I can relate to - divorced parents, memories of fights, trying to take care of my brother. Not fun. |


