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The Guy From the Sky
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Created on 4-7-07
| You find yourself falling to the ground and there's no help to be found But suddenly you hear this sound saying "Please don't turn around!" YOu turn your back to see who's there And when there's nothing you say "who cares!" Then suddenly you hear "I do!" From the sky so bright and blue You ask the question "why?" And from nowhere comes your reply He says "There's many people who care about you, who understand what its like to go through; But believe in me and you will see that you're never alone And your heart will be sown." Startled you start running down the path trying to escape this man's wrath And the voice begins to laugh He says "I know you far better than you do. I see what you're going through. Every day and every night And you must continue to fight Continue doing what is right! Tears start falling from your face as your heart begins to race The voice is gone, but the feelings still there Someone out there really does care. And although you can't see this guy you feel his pressence passing by You make it home and lie in bed So many thoughts racing through your head Yet again you start to cry And then comes the voice of this guy Same one, yet with another reply He says "I love you And I understand what you're going through But confide in me and you will see that I am always here to help you when you're in tears And together we will fight your darkest fears!" This voice gave you a reason to keep going never looking back, never slowing. So before you continue falling Remember to hear a voice calling. Calling to help you through When you're stuck on what to do And nobody understands what you're going through. |
Please Login to post comments| On July 12th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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great poem really expresses my feelings |
| On April 12th 2007 Lesliehu Said : | |
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love it |
| On April 10th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Really emotive. I like it a lot. |
| On April 9th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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... Wow.... That's really good. I must agree it's probally the best poem I've read on this site. You did a fantastic job with it. Keep it up. |
| On April 8th 2007 tavisamber Said : | |
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Wow, I love this poem. Honestly its the best one I read on this site. Thanks for sharing :) God Bless |
