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It is a question we all ask at one point

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Views (208) Passion Created on 11-20-07 Flag

When will I know bliss?

Will it calm my soul like a baby's kiss?

No longer treated with remiss

Is it safe to imagine this?

 

 

When can I know trust?

Is it safe to believe what is felt is not lust?

To soar without an armored husk

Not shatter like some whole wheat crust.

 

 

When will two become one?

A union symbiotic no one would dare shun

We'd shine like a thousand suns

How can I get that done?

 

 

When will I know love?

Will it be everything that I've dreamed of?

We'd fit like a hand in glove

If only I could find my love.

 

 

Douglas S. Williams
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On April 14th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I love this one. A question that we all have asked ourselves and maybe still do...I love the way you phrased each stanza. Your rhymes are so creative!
On March 13th 2008 dark013angel Said :
dark013angel Beautiful hun..
On January 9th 2008 KaosQueen Said :
KaosQueen so sweet this is great :]
On November 29th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord ahhh that was so beautiful, loved line two.
On November 24th 2007 Chula252 Said :
Chula252 *sighs* .. the questions that burn eternally within the heart of the hopeless romantic!!! Achingly beautiful ... it captured in perfection the bittersweet longing that is felt in the quest to discover those answers. Another wonderful poem ... You are and amazing writer!!!!
On November 24th 2007 ligersrockssox Said :
ligersrockssox it all flows :) hehehe i luv it its erally great and beautiful
On November 23rd 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz beautiful!! loved it!
On November 23rd 2007 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb I agree with all the rest, beautiful job and great question, well done! By the way, great wording choice, and very smooth! =)
On November 21st 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 aw this is sweet, and a good question. great job =]
On November 21st 2007 nockets Said :
nockets i'm kinda ify on the wheat crust part, but the last stanza is my absolute fave. you did an amazing job with it. i love it!
On November 21st 2007 perdylilpyro Said :
perdylilpyro very good job. you developed a theme and stuck to it and the first and last stanzas are especially strong :)
On November 21st 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo A constant question on the heart of a dreamer. Can totally relate. Beautiful job.
On November 21st 2007 dsouthernlily Said :
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Awesome. Everyone wonders that. Quit looking and love will find you. And when it does fight for it dont let it go :)
On November 21st 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 This is great, Yes it is a question we all have at some point. great Job!!