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Justified Karma
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Created on 11-13-07
Time is a fire
A raging searing tempest
In which we all burn
Your flame was tenured
But you've been rather careless
So now you must learn
so ummm, you're all man?
Deflowering her by force
My wrath you've now earned
Soaked in gas and bound
Time you see is a fire
And now you shall burn.
Burn....
Burn....
Burn....
Douglas S. Williams
Please Login to post comments| On June 8th 2008 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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4 separate Haikus intertwined to create an amazing poem. I love the idea, I love the creativity, I also believe in karma. This is absolutely my favorite! Possibly on the entire site. |
| On May 13th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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i noticed most of your poems are extremely short, but they always get the point across and are good |
| On April 2nd 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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ohhh yess this is my fav of yours |
| On February 26th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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Awesome nasty! |
| On January 15th 2008 dark013angel Said : | |
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very nice...don't really have any words to describe how much i love this. just..thank you for writing it. |
| On January 9th 2008 KaosQueen Said : | |
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oh wow nice nice lol xD haah BURNNN |
| On December 19th 2007 Daemion Said : | |
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this keeps to the idea of poetry, rhyme and all... but there's enough space between the rhymes intended that i'm happy with it... if rhymes are too close then it's just too nursery, ya know what i mean? |
| On December 8th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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this is good Doug! It makes me think..... |
| On December 4th 2007 donkaii Said : | |
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woww
very emotional!! |
| On December 3rd 2007 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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I have 2 daughters I can relate, very good |
| On November 29th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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you pour the gass I'll light the match!! deep and creative. love it!! |
| On November 24th 2007 ligersrockssox Said : | |
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wow wat a strong hate, ive felt that so many times. lol i dont think thats a good thing |
| On November 21st 2007 nockets Said : | |
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:-D |
| On November 20th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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OOooooohhh.... fierce vengeance,,, very nice ,,, good structure and form-method of wordings,,,,, lol,, i liked the thinking part "ummm"... feels more realistic in thought,,, very interesting subject,,, good job! |
| On November 18th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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I really liked it! this is true and I am a believer!!!! |
| On November 18th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Ooooo very atmospheric. I liked it....a lot! |
| On November 17th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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every action has an equal yet different reaction. very nice, good Job! |
| On November 15th 2007 Wyldemiller Said : | |
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damn nice like it :) |
| On November 14th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Very smooth, you added nice touch to it, when adding burn.. well done! |
| On November 14th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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wow...very nice!! :) |
| On November 14th 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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i really like this! great job =] |
| On November 13th 2007 reapersheart Said : | |
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interesting |
