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It's Yours
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Created on 11-13-07
You've captured my trust
At this moment you take it
My Innocence, yours
Douglas S. Williams
Please Login to post comments| On July 23rd 2008 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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a very few words but very powerful |
| On December 8th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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short, sweet and meaningful |
| On November 29th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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short and sweet! nice |
| On November 23rd 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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very nice, short and to the point!!! |
| On November 21st 2007 nockets Said : | |
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i like this one, that's all i have to say. simple and beautiful. the meaning is there, you don't need an explanation. nice work! |
| On November 18th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Trust...the hardest gift to give and the easiest to break. Loved it. |
| On November 14th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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Very good.. |
| On November 13th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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This is what I enjoy, it's short, I love short poems with so much meaning to it as morbidangel said. Very well said, well done! |
| On November 13th 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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short, but has a lot of meaning behind it |
