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The Big Plan
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Created on 11-10-07
(note) another marathon haiku. i cant help it once my brain starts going u know?
Running you a bath
The water I keep tepid
Raspberry Bubbles
Your work shift was long
Stressful and aggrivating
Come take a load off
You resist me not
Gracefully I disrobe you,
Lead you to your bath
Softly I bathe you
Placidity consumes you
I aim to please you
I towel you dry,
Carry you to your bedroom
Candles strewn about
Scented body oils
You're now my massage victim
My queen gets the best!
you're eyes, they roll back
My rubs stop, your eyes unfurl
I show you a ring
Eres para mi
Si. Estamos en amor
So lets jump that broom!
That was my big plan
To live as woman and man
....I take it you don't
Said you were working
So I skulked to your abode
And found you "working"
Wow! You're soaking wet
Oh! the Postman and Milkman?
Isn't that cliche?
Wait up, nah, don't move
I got some japanese steel
Can it get wet too?
Douglas S. Williams
Please Login to post comments| On April 2nd 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I've never read such a thing, but I really liked it! A haiku story w/ a twist. |
| On December 8th 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said : | |
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lovely. it's great. it had very intrigued. the ending with the slang and all. great. cherry on top of the icing! |
| On November 29th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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brilliant ending, love the "Japanes Steel" Wow only now found out what haiku means, i stand in awe and tip my hat. |
| On November 28th 2007 whore69hoe Said : | |
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your a really god poet ... i shall look up to you for that so that way im better at it |
| On November 23rd 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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again, I love how you Haiku your poems... lol,, great again!!! |
| On November 21st 2007 nockets Said : | |
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i liked how you put some spanish in there. exotic and sensual....damn, i don't know if i can handle it. lol. |
| On November 18th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Lol. Ok you had me until the halfway point. I was sighing contently thinking 'how sweet' then you twisted it to her cheating and you gonna slice and dice them! lol. Such a shame. |
| On November 13th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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I liked it...confused towards the end |
| On November 11th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Very interesting, I like your style, I kinda got lost in the ending, still very good, well done. |
| On November 10th 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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i like it..i didnt expect the ending |
| On November 10th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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Disclaimer: i readily admit it's not my best by far. i was just espieremting here. I hope u read it objectively. |
