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Tasting You!

Views (623) Haiku Created on 11-7-07 Flag

Intoxicating

I take a wiff of your flesh

an odor so sweet

 

 

Intoxicating

I graze your baby soft hairs

Cant wait to taste you

 

 

I throw my face in

I work magic inside you

I know you love it

 

 

Your flesh so damn soft

Gently I suck and I probe

your fluid's my prize

 

 

I take it all in

And ask if you enjoy it

But you cannot talk

 

 

I devour all

You never could resist me

              Heck, you're just a peach.

 

Douglas S. Williams

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On August 19th 2008 ArtemisStar Said :
ArtemisStar Gosh, your writings make me blush and tingle all at once. lol. x
On July 29th 2008 UPTmrscarter93 Said :
UPTmrscarter93 l0l. i like dis 1.
On July 15th 2008 1FallenAngel7 Said :
1FallenAngel7 haha awesome
On June 8th 2008 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv Amazing. I, of course, thought in terms of sexual desires in the beginning as well as everyone else. It had me at hello. I love how the end is slightly disappointing, and a relief still the same. Very clever! I love it!
On June 2nd 2008 thuhchris Said :
thuhchris haha.. love it man =]
On June 1st 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll That made me hot. lol I'm not a fan of porn, but this is so not porn~ yay! You captured it tastefully. Lovely job~
On May 13th 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet LMAO that was awesome
On April 13th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem OMG thats too funny! How clever!
On April 2nd 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 oh boy i love this one
On March 9th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 hehe peaches *starts laughing uncontrolablly almost falls off the bed*
On January 30th 2008 iLvJsus675699 Said :
iLvJsus675699 lol..wow.
On January 9th 2008 pecoros Said :
pecoros rofl, awesome xD
On January 9th 2008 KaosQueen Said :
KaosQueen OMG u got my jaw dropping there!! BAHAHAHAH XD this is great! XD
On December 27th 2007 Gredgar Said :
Gredgar i will never think of peaches the same way....ever x.x i fucking love this
On December 16th 2007 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex lol that sure tricked me:)
On November 29th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord AHHHHHH, had my mind in the gutter there. well done!!!
On November 25th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz OMG!!! You had me gone with this one..lol Ummmm, hmmmm, I don't know how to comment on this one,, but i will say this? I will never look at peaches the same way again!! lol.. great poem
On November 24th 2007 Chula252 Said :
Chula252 Wickedly enticing ... lol and I am very much aware of where my mind resides in terms of this ... but then as the writer I'm sure you are as well or you wouldn't be able to draw so keenly on the parallels :)~. Loved every drop of it ;)... well done sir!!!!
On November 21st 2007 nockets Said :
nockets hehehehehehehehe, is all i got to say ;-)
On November 18th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo *fans self*. Very hot. Speechless. haha
On November 11th 2007 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb lol, whos mind wasn't in the gutter when they read this poem, well done!
On November 11th 2007 unicorn08 Said :
my picture
awesome for a minute i was enthralled..
On November 9th 2007 nightangelgale Said :
nightangelgale great poem
On November 8th 2007 ligersrockssox Said :
ligersrockssox wow lolz that just puts you mind in the gutter but it was really good and awsomes and peaches will never be thought of the same way
On November 8th 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said :
MoOnZoMbIe great...loves it! total irony!