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Finding the Inner strength is hard.Rate this Poem
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Following Suit
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Created on 11-3-07
(Note) not going for style here....Just being real. view with an open mine.
A friend of a friend may have canceled himself
Which will cause another to do the same too
momentary doubt, lost sight, in need of help
support she needs but what can i do?
no close to aid she's far off somewhere else
My words are strong can I convince her to be cool
A talented writer who's chock full of potential
she needs not follow suit, her life's song is something special
Douglas S. Williams
Please Login to post comments| On November 15th 2008 caughtbysonnet Said : | |
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Very, very sweet :) well done xx |
| On November 18th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Lovely. Really thoughtful. |
| On November 11th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Really good, you're a thoughtful writing, I believe your poems shows what your personality is like perhaps? |
| On November 5th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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I love it! Very Sad though |
| On November 3rd 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I love it. It's really good. |
| On November 3rd 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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i know who that is about. It brought tears to my eyes to know someone cares about "her". |
