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In My Hands
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Created on 10-30-07
So Why can't I die?
My jovial mask, tainted
Suicide sounds good.
My life, My choice right?
I concede. I know when to quit.
So ends my life's song.
Douglas S.Williams
Please Login to post comments| On August 16th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said : | |
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gorgous. simply in the most complicated way, just gorgous. |
| On July 8th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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well, one can pardon a slip up in perfection, now and again *winks*. All in all I love the depth of pathos in this one.~L |
| On April 2nd 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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(WOW) |
| On November 28th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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I just now realized that in the second stanza that i have 8 syllables in the second line lol. dangit. how could i have let that slip. sorry to all who have read it and to those who will. |
| On November 25th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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yes it is short, and ones choice, but sing another song!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol... :-) |
| On November 18th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Short, but powerful punch. |
| On November 11th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Short and strong, I love it! |
| On October 31st 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Oh wow, this is amazing! Very thought provoking... |
| On October 31st 2007 Bumpkingurl Said : | |
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[can empathise] |
| On October 30th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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wow that is just wow |
