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You can never be too sure.
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Created on 5-31-08
You can never be too sure,
but son,
I know your gonna love her.
.
I'm telling you,
you better love her for all the right reasons,
because you've given me reason to believe in,
you to be the one, for she's a heavenly gift
all's I want you to remember is, with all the love
I've gave her, she'll never forget.
.
You can never be too sure,
but son,
I know your gonna love her.
.
Love her as your own,
go on son take her home,
and make each other happy for the both of us,
keep her close & never break her trust,
Daddy, loves you girl,
but you've grown up so fast,
it's like all I've got now is memories of the past,
& when you were born,
crying cause my little girl was just born &
placed in my arms,
those are moments I'll forever charm,
so no matter how old you grow,
Remember your never to old to be daddy's little girl.
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You can never be too sure,
but son,
I know your gonna love her.
.
For she's the sweetest thing on earth,
that's why I'm telling you capture every moment,
cause it's worth more then we think,
thing's happen as fast as we can blink,
that's why I'm tell you,
.
You can never be too sure,
but son,
I know your gonna love her.
Please Login to post comments| On June 4th 2008 bluedevilschic Said : | |
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i love it. good job |
| On June 3rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is beautiful. I love it. It tells a lovely story. Nice job! |
| On May 31st 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Agree with "smile4evr." Nice change for you, but I still like some of your old thins as whell. |
| On May 31st 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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this is so sweet and poetic! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!! |
| On May 31st 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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I'm not to sure the inspiration behind this piece but I love the outcome on it...way different from most of my stuff. |
