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New song.... by me.....may 14th 2008Rate this Poem
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Intentions
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Created on 5-15-08
I hope your intentions were to love me,
like I loved you,
I wonder if you felt the same tension,
Every time I forgot to tell you.
.
I seen a beautiful girl,
every time I looked in your eyes,
it was like my own personal window,
to see into your heart,
where nothing but truth laid
this song may be old,
or may be new,
you can tell by this song,
I've missed you,
but ever since you've been gone,
I've been lonesome trying to mend,
My broken heart.
.
I hope your intentions were to love me,
like I loved you,
I wonder if you felt the same tension,
Every time I forgot to tell you.
.
You left for a good reason,
I didn't treat you right,
although it was something I believed in,
I should've held on tight,
I let you slip away without,
even putting up a fight,
you've said some hurtful things,
and you had the right,
if I would've been there more,
We'd probably still be together tonight.
.
I hope your intentions were to love me,
like I loved you,
I wonder if you felt the same tension,
Every time I forgot to tell you.
.
I'm sorry, I was to blind to see,
and for every time I got mad,
and I only thought of me,
I know I was wrong,
and this song right here,
might not mean a thing,
but sometimes having closure,
Might bring out another song,
That's a little more happier,
for both of us to sing,
playing each melody from our hearts,
forever and beyond theses days,
we can now put behind us.
Please Login to post comments| On May 16th 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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this is so amazingly written! who is this for.....well whoever it is for she is one lucky and very special girl! i love all ur writings they really touch my heart! |
| On May 15th 2008 xoSuMmErRLuVoX Said : | |
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this is a really good song! i think its great that you realized and were able to admit what you did wrong. You should definitly show this to the girl this song is about and hopefully you and her could get back together |
