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I've never wasted so much time.
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Created on 3-28-08
I've never wasted so much time or energy on someone so truthless
It's like this battles already over he's toothless,
my rhymes are ruthless
He's useless the way he writes about me in paraphs,
doesn't he realize nobody laughs at his jokes,
I'm sorry folks,
I'm the only john Wayne left In this town,
and everyone I like knows how I get down,
when I clown somebody and make them look stupid,
I shoot arrows like cupid,
I'm the new kid on the block his rhymes will never form into nothing hot,
please tell this skadmark to stop I'm at the top of the hill
and If he makes me feel sorry for him I might throw him a dollar bill,
Cause I'm already worth over a mill,
I'm the next general mills of rap so watch who you attack
cause it might come back and smack you with the lack of skills you have.
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Brotha hood isn't easy but I'm way to greasy
and that poem about me was way to cheesy it didn't please me
when I read it I was like forget it this skadmarks going to get it
Like no other and the sad thing is I feel sorry for his mother
Spitting out another bad seed and this fool wants to feed me
The fuel to do theses deeds yes indeed this kids in need
Of some mantel support a matter a fact heres his bus
It's nice and short.
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A little word to the wise somebody get this guy
Before he cries me a river
I wrote this song over dinner knowing I'd come out to be the winner
I mean look what I'm facing it's like retracing my steps back
to when I was five man having talent makes me feel so alive
and come to think about it I didn't even try.
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Laughing my fucking ass off
Please Login to post comments| On March 31st 2008 bluedevilschic Said : | |
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u would make a good rapper some day. Like your stuff. keep it coming. |
| On March 30th 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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i like this one |
| On March 28th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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You little rapper you. :) This was a fun read. |
| On March 28th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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Become* |
| On March 28th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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whoa I whopped some ass and took some names as I put them to shame for thinking there good and I'm the white boy you'll catch singing I'm so hood in the mirror to myself but if I because a rapper I'll guarantee you I wont sit on the shelf. |
